Editing, Analysis and Critiquing. Two cents per word.



Have you written a novel or a story? Would you like to have a professional critique,
along with line editing and analysis of plot, characterization and point-of-view?

We would be happy to perform all these tasks for two cents per word.



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In addition to line editing suggestions, these thirteen essential elements are included in the analysis:

Plot Development
Style and Voice
Scene and Setting
Characterization
Conflict and Tension
Point-of-view
Dialogue
Grammar, Punctuation, and Spelling
Telling vs Showing
Passive vs Active
Use of Clichés
Foreshadowing
World-building




Here is a short, but very helpful description of what a book editor does to a manuscript.

This article is written by an editor who knows her business. If you're not using an editor for your book, you may be making a big mistake.

An editor’s job can be large or small. You might simply want a pro to check your punctuation, or maybe you need someone to look over larger plot elements, like plot development. Editors generally correct a manuscript based first on the writer’s goals, then on the shape or condition of the writing itself. An edit often includes the following: errors in syntax (spelling, punctuation & grammar—a line edit or a proofread, character development, plot structure and clarity, in addition to keeping an eye out for clichéd phrases, over-used words and the overall organization of the story.

When self-publishing a book, it is the author’s responsibility to make sure the text is error-free. Most print on demand publishers will edit your book for a steep fee but do not require that manuscripts be edited before being printed. Therefore it is possible for a book to be published—with an author’s name in big, proud letters—and tainted with grammatical errors, misspellings, mistakes in punctuation or poorly-organized material. (Traditional publishers have in-house editors who edit according to the house style, which is varied.)

If you get signed on by a major publishing house, your editor works for the publisher. If you hire an editor before submitting or self-publishing your book, your editor works for you. Get you money’s worth. Do you know what you want? More importantly—do you know what you need? (Kind of like life, huh?)

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